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Blade Hunter Knife
Wil you give me your comments about this poem?
"Listen"
shhh... can you hear it?
i can the night is on its way
the dark creatures no longer need to hide
shhh...can you hear it?
the victems silent screams
can you feel it? the blade of the Knife
can you see it? the dark eyes of their hunter
shhh... can you hear it?
the laghter of the dark ones
i knew you couldnt
thats why its coming for you
sure you can hide... it will seek
sure you can cry... no one will hear
they are unstoppable and i can feel it
shhh... listen....
night is here
okay gentle with the critisism i havent written for a while i just needed to write..... (P.S. do you guys ever feel or see and hear bad things happen at night it happens every once in a while to me)
Yeah, I hear you...I can feel the night closing in on me. It's more prevalent when I am out, alone, in a wide open place (camping in the mountains or something like that.)
Why can't "dark things" ever feel like they're bringing good news?
As for the poem, it is a little rough. You can, I'm sure, harvest some good imagery out of this for future writing.
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